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Will the waves wash a corpse up with it?
Or are they trying to catch hold of me…
A faint murmur fills the entire ambiance.
The waters rustle out my name…
I walk ahead…
Facing darkness in my face
A zephyr swirls around me…
Do I smell Death??
Hurried steps
Footprints on the sand…
Soils running deep under the water…
Am I there yet??
A pandemonium in my head…
Cluttered waves, ogreish cries…
I run…!!!
Into the sea, into the deep
Embrace Life, defunct
Break all barriers…
I am alive once again!!!
Or are they trying to catch hold of me…
A faint murmur fills the entire ambiance.
The waters rustle out my name…
I walk ahead…
Facing darkness in my face
A zephyr swirls around me…
Do I smell Death??
Hurried steps
Footprints on the sand…
Soils running deep under the water…
Am I there yet??
A pandemonium in my head…
Cluttered waves, ogreish cries…
I run…!!!
Into the sea, into the deep
Embrace Life, defunct
Break all barriers…
I am alive once again!!!
A strange feeling that gripped me, staring at the Sea
Place : Miramar beach, Goa
Time : Nearly 1:00 am
Date : 21st June 2006
Place : Miramar beach, Goa
Time : Nearly 1:00 am
Date : 21st June 2006
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Very eerie poem Aniruddha,
But it still is a beautiful one, your choice of words is inspiring and even make one stop and think about life and all the changes it brings...
Very scary imagery which wakes the reader up and shows them the reality of things that are not usually looked at in depth!
Great job, it surely captivated me!
But it still is a beautiful one, your choice of words is inspiring and even make one stop and think about life and all the changes it brings...
Very scary imagery which wakes the reader up and shows them the reality of things that are not usually looked at in depth!
Great job, it surely captivated me!